
I wished on a weed, while I watched the seed float away as fast as my breath
I wished on a weed, as I wish on a birthday candle while I watched the flame dwindle away with my breath
I wished on a weed encumbered in a flame, it must not be the same as I watched the flame dancing as it swayed away with my breath
I wished on a weed, I blew with all my breath. My breath was taken I wished so hard. The flame took all the air I had. I believe the fire that embraced all my wishes made that weed turn to ashes
I wished on a weed, my breath was taken, I wished so hard oh how will I know now when all I see is ashes of my wish if it will indeed come true. If that weed only knew all my heart has been through
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Such a moving poem Lisa
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Thank you so very much for your kind words! 😊
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You’re most welcome
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Poignant and moving, Lisa! A beautifully written piece, and thank you so much for joining in. 💛
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Thank you I really enjoyed this prompt! It all just flowed from within very fast, that’s when I know I have a good one. Thank you for putting it together for us to all join in on 😊
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My pleasure and I am delighted you joined in.
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Nice poem Lisa! I love it!
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Awe thank you so very much! 😊
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So touching! This is beautiful.
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Thank you it was so fun! 😊
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